Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Third feather in our cap

Firstly, let me apologize to our fans for the delay in our next composition. Instead of wasting our energies on all kinds of possibilities, we have decided to concentrate on writing 6 line poems. A 14 line poem is referred to as a sonnet and hence we had to find a name for this new genre of poetry. We decided to keep our modesty and humility aside for this one (how many times in ur life do u get to name a work on art on urself ?) and name it on ourselves. So henceforth, we will refer to our creations i.e. 6 line chat poetry as Kasper (Kaddy + Super). here goes our next creation

On a rainy day in June.
Thinking since afternoon
Seeing Joshi the baboon
Looks of a cartoon
Beware of this moroon
Has evolution happened too soon ?
Signed
Kaddy & Super
Your invaluable comments on helping us to further improve upon our skills (although as a dialogue in our fav movie goes Perfection is difficult to improve upon) are most welcome.
PS: For those of u who think we misspelled moron, it has been done on purpose to keep the rhyming scheme. Gr8 poets do it all the time. :)
Disclaimer: All characters and names in this work of art are purely fictional. Any resemblance to a person living or dead is fully coincidental. :))

9 comments:

kaddy said...

Just as Shakespeare wrote a poem to immortalise his friend... in the same way this poem is dedicated to our late friend.... we happened to call him Joshi (just read the disclaimer)

insane said...

if only joshi reads this..he will be after u ppl..such a nice fella being humiliated at his back..

insane said...

read ur previous masterpiece..guess u r improving.earlier one...was it an advertisement of tide wid aman verma or was it an attempt to rise to the heights of english poetry..
u can do better...neways wash wash wash........!!!

Someone said...

Dude, read the disclaimer. This poem is not directed towards any person living or dead.

Joshi said...

Oh let the sun beat down upon my face, stars to fill my dream

I am a traveler of both time and space, to be where I have been
( others can only dream )

Talk and song from tongues of lilting grace, whose sounds caress my ear

But not a word I heard could I relate, the poem was quite clear.

Someone said...

Dude, nice try. U think u can hide behind the name of Joshi and fool us ? Ur poem doesn't even rhyme and is nowhere close to a Kasper. This poem is dedicated to one of our friends who is not with us now (God, rest his soul). Its mean to make fun of people's emotions. God, why do u create ppl like this who don't care for others' feelings. sniff sniff (sounds of crying):((

Joshi said...

Do want you want, I won't take the brunt.
It's fadin' away, can't feel you anymore.

One of these days and it won't be long,
You'll look for me but baby, I'll be gone.

Someone said...

hey buddy, stop playing with the name Joshi. Don't u have a normal name that u have to go stealing names of ppl who have ceased to exist ? Neways stop using this blog to post ur crappy whatever u call them lines. Don't u have ur own blog ? Grow Up, man

shonali said...

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